Some people believe the media should be allowed to publish private information about people, while others are against it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and relevant examples
In modern era, media is an integral part of our life because it provide information about whole world. Some folks believe that media
Should be broadcasted personal memories of the celebrities but other people are against it and everyone has right to live another life that far away from name and fame. This essay will discuss both prospects in subsequent paragraphs
To begin with, nowadays everyone wants to become famous in this world that is why many celebrities publishing their personal photos on social media so they can create strong bond among their fans. For example, present time many people who are belong to our country or belong to another Nation, they upload their personal stuff on internet because many people want to know about their personal life, if they want to still famous person they fulfill their fans demand, it is mandatory for celebrities
On the other hand, some people who are famous for something they also live another life because they do not like upload their personal stuff online because they believe that some notorious people misused of their personal data. For instance, these days some people create fake account and messaging with other people. Hence, this thing is not good for celebrities and for his fan following
In conclusion, upload personal information On internat is good because celebrities fulfill their fans demand but In limit, they do not publishing those items which create some problems
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- Some people believe the media should be allowed to publish private information about people while others are against it Discuss both views and give your own opinion and relevant examples 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: provides
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Suggestion: who is a are
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Suggestion: belonged
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13865546218 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31127575633 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.627252076 49.4020404114 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.833333333 106.682146367 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.6666666667 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.8333333333 7.06120827912 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159964703384 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101681676294 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507560183787 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110154529748 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458897026618 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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