Declining Education Standard
Student have currently heeded educational standard, which literacy and numeracy are the most
affected. Some people content that the fact mentioned is utterly true, and the aftermath of this
situation are comprised of as follows.
First of all, the easiness of obtaining information through the internet is the main cause student
hitherto face. Literature of any kind of subjects easily retrieved without any hurdle prompts the
student having lack of literacy. In addition, overwhelmingly-spread internet over the world nowadays
have a considerable impact to the educational standard. Internet users freely share a post such as
news, information, events and even rumour, on social media regardless of its source and the
authenticity of the post. For instances, some people on Whatsapp group often share hoax news -
information from untrustworthy resources that makes bias to the social - namely related to politics,
health suggestion, sports, gossips and rumour of actress or actor and moreover family matters.
Secondly, calculator-based application installed on our mobile phone or personal computer affects
people, particularly student, weaken their computation skill. Instead of counting manually, many use
numerical-based application Microsoft Excel for solving mathematics or physic problem
straightforwardly, even the simple one. This circumstance deteriorates people’s computational sense
and declining their numeracy.
Admittedly, the best solution of literacy problem is to accustom deploying post attained from trusted
origin along with link and source’s address while overcoming decreasing numeracy over the people is
by usually using the our competent-brain for simple calculation to sharpen the mathematics skill.
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- Saving Endangered Animal 84
- Internet user 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ch literacy and numeracy are the most affected. Some people content that the fact ment...
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...terly true, and the aftermath of this situation are comprised of as follows. First of...
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Suggestion: Hitherto
...he internet is the main cause student hitherto face. Literature of any kind of subject...
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...read internet over the world nowadays have a considerable impact to the educationa...
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Suggestion: Authenticity
...edia regardless of its source and the authenticity of the post. For instances, some people...
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Suggestion: People
...le phone or personal computer affects people, particularly student, weaken their com...
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Suggestion: Straightforwardly
...solving mathematics or physic problem straightforwardly, even the simple one. This circumstance...
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...tes people's computational sense and declining their numeracy. Admittedly,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23076923077 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34776476336 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688259109312 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4109703438 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.909090909 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119675493642 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494855190223 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857852340253 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0350151159621 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810785995454 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.15 12.4159519038 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.25 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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