Some people think that books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree?
Books are a treasure of knowledge which people can find some things they need. They were very popular with many people around the world. However, books are increasingly becoming less important as a source of information and entertainment. I strongly agree with this statement because of two reasons: the Internet has been invented and the kinds of entertainment have been begun.
To begin with, it is believed that people are becoming less dependent on books as a source of information. Books are not only the way to gain information because of the Internet. Since the easy way to find out information, many people choose the Internet than books. Another reason is that people can check the truth of what they search. For instance, a recent survey in the U.S found that ninety per cent of people relies on the Internet to gain information. As a result, books are losing their important role in our life.
On the other side, although funny stories are printed in books, lots of people especially teenager prefer playing sports, going to the cinema… than reading book. They choose that because of health benefits and being bored with reading books. For example, a study in Australia found that eighty-five per cent of people doesn’t want to read books. Consequently, books are being a deserted as a way of entertainment because of many kinds of entertainment available these days.
In conclusion, I agree that the importance of books is fading in today’s world. As a convenient easy way, good for their health Word Wide Web and other entertainment are a good choice for most people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9776119403 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77971801747 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518656716418 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9695421952 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247437064843 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891196004643 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757938125454 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147121879769 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743497895436 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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