In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
this topic raises the controversial issue whether, discussion among people having different opinions to any problem or situation brings progress. Indisputably, it is required for people who have contrasting opinions to discuss in other for the best among all the opinions to prevail in solving the problem at hand. Nevertheless, in some situation progress is made by people without conflicting opinions or even just by one person such as most technological advancement. Thus, I would argue that for progress to be achieved, conflicting opinions from different people is required.
different opinions from several people actually bring progress in several situation. this is because when conflicting opinions are tailored toward as problem in ist cases that problem is usually viewed from several angle which will eventually pave way for the best solution to solve the problem at hand . For example in Nigeria, a country that has a long list of political parties which have different ideology and doctrine of governance. Nigeria also run an executive system of government, but the decision making in the constitution is done by the house of representatives and senate. Both the house of representatives and senate comprises of congress men and women from different parties and during decision making on several issues about moving the country forward, they all bring forward their opinions, though in some cases this lead to intense argument, but in most cases the best decision that favours all parties and the country at large is reached. also, in 2013, president Goodluck Jonathan-the sitting president of the federal republic of Nigeria then setup a committee named CONFAB which comprises of different people from every part of the country such as: chiefs, lectures, student leaders, elders and veterans all in a large conference room to discuss and try to bring suggestion to provides solutions to several problems. this initiative worked pretty well because most of the ideas and decision made than were implemented and are still working well till date.
However, we've seen several situations where progress have been made by like-minded persons with similar views. For example, during the pandemic outbreak of the Ebola hemorrhagic in most past of the African continent, the Zika virus outbreak in America. The outbreak of these deadly diseases led to the coming together of like-minded scientist that understood the concept of diseases of nature and they were able to mass produce vaccines and came up with ways the human populace can prevent the transfer of these diseases. but looking at the situation critical it is clear that though the group consist of like-minded scientist, they must have looked at the problems from different angle before a suitable and workable cure is discovered for these diseases.
In conclusion, from the analysis of this issue whether progress can be obtained by contrasting point of view, it is clear from the examples provided that one of the major requirement to providworking solutions to solving problematic situation is having contrasting point of view so as to pave way for the best solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, then, thus, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in most cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2645.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 501.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27944111776 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81107037142 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502994011976 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 824.4 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.760308471 60.3974514979 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.3125 118.986275619 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3125 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 5.21951772744 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240541754886 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823480152791 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955421244861 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16646905092 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115336326151 0.0667264976115 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 14.1392134831 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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