The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A habit can be developed easily in a person when he is young . As surroundings impact children and young about how their behaviour is turning out to be it is the responsibility of every one in tuning them . What ever the competitive spirit they inject in them is just because of their continuous exposure in the schools to be so.Even the co operative spirit is generated with in them from childhood by watching it in their homes.In this essay we are going to see how both Co-operative and competitive spirit are equally important and have to be prepared in a young so that it can be helpful in his overall developement.
To begin with the fast paced society we are witnessing is due to the competition it have in every aspect. it is so important not just for professional growth but for personal growth too! if there exist no one to compete with ,the zeal in us to make us come from our comfort zone decrease .For instance 2 companies producing similar products with no variation in price and quality have to compete in the market to be on position one so that by advertising them as 'number 1' people will be interested to buy the product from company ranked 1 just by seeing the '1' position.
In the corporate culture cooperation plays a major role. For example the increase in work pressure results in damaging metal health a personal change comes only if the people around feel to help them . this kind of coöperation need to prevail in all kinds of fields.
Examining these two hypothetical assertions allow us to uncover the problematic assumptions with original assertions a balance of both cooperation and competative spirit are to be equally given importance to be inculcated in younf for their over all growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77152317881 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83386439738 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.297396168 60.3974514979 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.111111111 118.986275619 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5555555556 23.4991977007 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994024325123 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040162120505 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302163983018 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591085511192 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181276045117 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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