A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The issue being discussed here is about the curriculum of the school going students of the nation. As we all know School curriculum acts as the foundation of what students will be studying further in college. The basic concept needs to be clear to achieve success in future.
So we need to be precise and very particular when a curriculum is setup. As i would suggest the curriculum should not be same until they enter college as the world is ever changing, there are always new inventions coming up every day, the history needs to be changed. We need to update our books with new information and the new inventions. There political party keeps changing, they come up with new policy and new rules. There are many new political party which has emerged in recent past. So we need to make sure these updates are being taught to the students.
In India there were 28 states and in recent days there was a portion and now India has 29 states. If we do not update our curriculum the students will not be aware of the latest change.
Also, there are choices given to students when they are in the final year of their schooling to choose the subjects they want to pursue in future. Like do they want to take science, commerce or arts based on their interest. So every student will have different curriculum and they should be given this freedom to choose their subject. A student who wants to pursue engineering should not be forced to study arts as he might not be interested in it and they time he will take to learn art , he can utilize that in doing more experiment and learning more technological concepts.
But somewhere down the line the same curriculum can also help students as there will be equality. The students will be judged in exams on common ground. As school is the foundation, it can be good for the students to learn all the subjects as there are few students who might not have found out their interest yet. It will be beneficial for those student if there is same curriculum nationwide.
So I am in partial agreement with the issue mentioned by the author. It may be beneficial for some student where as it can be very time consuming and waste for energy for rest of the students who have already decided their career paths.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.9520958084 162% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 405.0 441.139720559 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67654320988 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41174136184 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 204.123752495 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476543209877 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8006537019 57.8364921388 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1904761905 119.503703932 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 23.324526521 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.04761904762 5.70786347227 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.20758483034 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231625613403 0.218282227539 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736832292624 0.0743258471296 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662676299598 0.0701772020484 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116716361438 0.128457276422 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614866734367 0.0628817314937 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.3550499002 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.197005988 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.32208582834 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 98.500998004 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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