The chart shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006
Depicted by graph is the information about the price changes (in Euros) of 800 grams of four different bread kinds in an European country over a half decade, since 2001.
Overall, it can be seen that the general trend was for the price of four kinds of bread relatively to increase throughout the time scale.
The figures for Brown, White, and Riye showed a similar number by 2001, at 0.6. After 2001, there was a dramatic increase for the the level of Brown and White, soaring to 1.6 and just over 1.2 each, while the latter dropped slightly by 0.1 in 2002, after which the price soared to just above 0.6 at the end of period.
On the other hand, the price of Wholegrain remained stable during the timeline, where it stood at 0.8 by at the beginning of period. Afterwards, although reaching a peak at 1.8 a year later –the highest figure shown- the level eventually fell back to the initial number (0.8) by 2006.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...2001, there was a dramatic increase for the the level of Brown and White, soaring to 1....
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Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...2001, there was a dramatic increase for the the level of Brown and White, soaring to 1....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60240963855 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25137657282 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1791876217 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.8 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232705998003 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118764894696 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116205543858 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143106550833 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118266646142 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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