As capitalism started to prosper after collapse of communism in 1990s, numerous enterprises have thrived in most of nations. Our parents and we have been given lots of opportunities to work in organisations and attributed to better lives. Despite the fact that it is more disadvantageous to be self-employment, many people choose to be self-employed with many reasons such as stress, good ideas and achievements. This essay will discuss about self-employment and disadvantages.
In fact, it is very stressful to work with senior supervisors, which they order and sometimes press for faster and better consequences. Hence, many workers accumulate experiences whether or not the work he or she is doing, has possibilities in order to establish start-up companies but also some people establish company to achieve their goals of contribution for societies, wealth or reputations. In this case, leadership and progression are to be considered for whom people desire to be self-employed. For these reasons, many attempt to start their own business in order to achieve their desire.
However, people who want self-employment should prioritise researching negative aspects. Study, published by The University of Seoul, demonstrates that bankruptcy of less than three-year-old business was found the owners did not search negative factors sufficiently. This suggests that ignorance of aware of disadvantages is an actual indicator of investment risk. Moreover, having said that it is stressful with senior supervisor, we should contemplate for other factors of stress. For instance, decrease in sales, negative news on your business and dedication for own business may affect to mental state and health as well.
To sum up, many people start their own businesses to avoid stress from workplaces or to achieve their goals, however in fact, there are also disadvantages to be self-employed.
Capitalism started to thrive after collapse of communism in 1990s and triggered people to have more opportunities. Hence, many people choose to work for themselves rather than companies or organisations. However, there are also many drawbacks to run own businesses. This essay will discuss about reasons people tend to to self-employed and negative aspects.
To start with, there are two main reasons that people attempt to run their own businesses. Firstly, capitalism indeed make people incredibly rich and hence, many hope to become an entrepreneur in order to raise their revenue. In other words, they would run their own enterprise to achieve their goals as well as adequate wealth. For instance, Bill Gates, Steve Jobs and Mark Zuckerberg established huge company with help of creative idea and accomplished their goals and sufficient assets, which is great inspiration for those who would like to start their businesses. Secondly, retirees still need to dedicate for their offspring and their bright future. Thesedays, people could live longer than 80 but most of people might retire approximately mid-60s because of the lack of stamina. That may deteriorate further quality of life due to less incomes.
However, people should recognise downsides of running businesses. The most common failure is lack of knowledge of business. There are lots of external and internal factors that may devastate business and it is even struggling for whom he or she has graduated from business course in tertiary institution. Moreover, if businesses undergo hardship due to other factors that you cannot control, it will be extremely stressful. For instance, not contagious is the only biggest enemy for farmers but also natural disasters, like tornado, typhoon and earthquake, may be the causes of uncontrollable factors and hence, this would bring you bankruptcy and liabilities.
In conclusion, lots of people choose to be self-employed in order to achieve their goals or retirees run businesses for the rest of their lives. However, there are adequate factors that might ruin your business. Therefore, consideration about disadvantages should be prioritised.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1990s'.
Suggestion: in the 1990s
... to prosper after collapse of communism in 1990s, numerous enterprises have thrived in m...
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Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the nations') or simply say ''most nations''.
Suggestion: most of the nations; most nations
...s, numerous enterprises have thrived in most of nations. Our parents and we have been given lot...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out self-employment and disadvantages. In fact, it is very stressful to work wi...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ce, many workers accumulate experiences whether or not the work he or she is doing, has possib...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun attempt seems to be countable; consider using: 'many attempts'.
Suggestion: many attempts
...to be self-employed. For these reasons, many attempt to start their own business in order to...
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Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1990s'.
Suggestion: in the 1990s
...d to thrive after collapse of communism in 1990s and triggered people to have more oppor...
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Line 9, column 317, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
... will discuss about reasons people tend to to self-employed and negative aspects. ...
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Line 11, column 158, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hope seems to be countable; consider using: 'many hopes'.
Suggestion: many hopes
... make people incredibly rich and hence, many hope to become an entrepreneur in order to r...
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Line 11, column 705, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...s, people could live longer than 80 but most of people might retire approximately mid-60s beca...
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Line 11, column 839, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun incomes is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...eriorate further quality of life due to less incomes. However, people should rec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 31.0 10.4138276553 298% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 41.998997996 217% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3436.0 1615.20841683 213% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 624.0 315.596192385 198% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50641025641 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99799879888 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10676261203 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 176.041082164 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471153846154 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1043.1 506.74238477 206% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 16.0721442886 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4926336167 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.121212121 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.9879759519 451% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346958041863 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929930696874 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110809693625 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197267581229 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834392430375 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 78.4519038076 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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