The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the ma
The bar charts illustrate export of one country in various categories by scale of 10 to 70 from 2015 to 2016. Petroleum products, Engineered goods, Gems and jewellery, Agricultural products and Textiles were included as well as the table below lists fluctuation in percentage during same period.
All bars except Gems and jewellery slightly increased, however, Gems and jewellery had decrease export compared with a year before. Moreover, Petroleum products and Engineered goods exceeded over 60 and Agricultural products and Textiles had equivalent exports apparently.
The table demonstrates fluctuation in exact percentages, which also shows Gems and jewellery had declined only. It had decrease of 5.18%. On the other hand, the biggest change of export was the Textiles, which had increased 15.24% within a year but the lowest one was Agricultural products, which indicated 0.81% increase. Two others, Petroleum products and Engineered goods had increase of 3% and 8.5% of exports, respectively.
- the plans below show a public park when it was first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 84
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
- The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. 61
- The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the ma 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, moreover, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66447368421 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96619340639 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6727123206 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.625 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 5.23603664747 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205823648785 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862559404898 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106023467426 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149416815274 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10184158585 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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