Hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup can bring benefits to the host countries. How far do you agree with this statement? Use your own examples to support.
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the importance and credibility of hosting the different sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup competitions can lead to a thought-provoking discussion. From my perspective, I am tending to believe that hosting such sporting events can have a positive effect on the economy as many supporters will come to watch their teams and this will refresh the marketing and tourism industry.
To commence with, hosting sporting events can have an outsized impact on the economy of the hosting country and this will lead to an increase in the foreign current in the country. it is important to note that when the country host such sporting events, this will create many job opportunities for the local people. For instance, France claimed that hosting the World cup in 1998 has improved the economy by 46% and this shows the importance of hosting sporting events. Thus, this is crucial for the economy.
In the same context, hosting sporting events can guarantee a lot of job opportunities for the local people as they will work in many places such as hotels and restaurants. It is also vital to argue that these job opportunities will also allow the local people to contact with the supporters from many locations around the globe so it will improve the culture of them. Hence, hosting sporting events has proven its benefits for both individuals and society.
To Recapitulate, I see equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided above, and hence I believe that hosting sporting events is beneficial for the countries because it improves the economy and the individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08510638298 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85183116593 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492907801418 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9151701784 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.4 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315537772333 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147259794703 0.0925447433944 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621525915445 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202091780649 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637511322954 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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