Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
globalization and technological advancements has made humans a gadgets parasite. I absolutely agree that we are more dependable on e-books and other modern technologies by substituting the traditional newspapers and magazines.In the next paragraphs, i will illustrate the reasons for the same.
First and foremost reason is the globalization which led to increase in the level of competition in the market which made people to adopt more convenient and comfortable mediums such as e-books and cellphone news applications like "times of India" etc. to stay updated.
Secondly, these e-books and modern technology not only saves time but made more convenient for everyone to get news at any time and at any place. Third, newspapers and magazines are difficult to carry and handle while travelling, while theses gadgets are compatible and handy to carry around. The change in the living standards due to the technological influence, we humans are amenable towards the gadgets.
To close, I would say that the flourishing technological advancements had made everything so handy that we prefer more comfort and convenience and these modern technology had fulfilled their desires.
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- Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 11
- Some people say that protecting the environment is the governments responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones or laptops. Is it good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion. 56
- Some people support development of agriculture like, factory farming and scientific creation of fruits and vegetables. While other oppose. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Globalization
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gadgets'' or 'gadget's'?
Suggestion: gadgets'; gadget's
...ological advancements has made humans a gadgets parasite. I absolutely agree that we ar...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s and magazines.In the next paragraphs, i will illustrate the reasons for the sam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 182.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67582417582 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21867362749 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2269588335 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.125 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0489342415122 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0181298489612 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0215114768608 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0320991477828 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164816578939 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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