Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by local farmers.
Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Many goods especially food from foreign countries are imported to domestic and consumed by customer these days. Individuals have faith in the grow of environment and economy of country if people use no more than food that provided by domestic farmer. It is a belief that if citizen start choosing only food from local farmer, it can bring more benefits to country than drawback can make.
Food from local famer can be infested with chemicals and that is the downside of local cuisine. Farmer who have greedy personality can make use of pesticide and growth chemical for plants because plants can be mature faster by this way. Therefore, the food that we consumed can be infested and cause many diseases. For instance, the main reason that lead to diarrhea is vegetable and meat have a certain amount of chemical left in there.
On the other hand, when people have more favorable in local products and spend money on them more than imported products, the economy and the environment will be improved in many ways. When people buy local food, there is a small amount of money charge for taxes then deliver to National Bank. In addition, the higher the budget in National Bank, the higher the living standards of citizen improve. For example, more hospitals, parks, roads are upgraded for the resident to enjoy better service and to improve the quality of life. Because individuals use local foods more than before, so they have to product more to meet the demand. Therefore, more trees and plants are planted in many places. It will be affected the environment quality because of metabolism in plants. There will be fresh air everywhere rather than polluted one for people to breath in because of metabolism in plants. Furthermore, the health of citizen can be improved when they inhale and exhale fresh air.
In conclusion, the drawbacks are just minor when compare to the benefits can bring. That is a duty of citizen to contribute help for country in need. And buy food from local farmer is the answer that country seek because it is benefit for the economy and the environment of country
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...r these days. Individuals have faith in the grow of environment and economy of country i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87186629526 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41657220675 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467966573816 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0372806217 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0526315789 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234505459957 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793288999634 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572143162813 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149166368606 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286862331141 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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