Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Men and Women together make a society. In today's era both of them is considered equally in all prospectives. Not only men but also women are serving together for a secure and bright future of the society. Therefore as per my view, I mostly disagree with the statement that both men and women are not equally suited for many tasks.To support my viewpoint, I have various examples illustruted below.
In 21st century gender discrimination has completely banned in most of the countries. Women today have explored various sectors and have acquired a huge amount of knowledge which has indeed helped to acquired a higher position. Consider the example of Kiran Bedi who has today achieved a great success by winning varioud cases in the court. Not only today but also in the past years, women has achieved a great fame in various sectors. For instance, Kalpana Chawla was the first women asthrougant going to space from India. Therefore women in the past as well as today has potential to achieve success in every sector as that of men.
Women are as skilled as that of men so women should also explore. Various examples in history were Rani Laxmi Bai who is considered as a great warrior even today because of here skills. She was the one who fought for freedom. Today women do play various sports like cricket, kabaddi, hockey, wresting, etc and has being awarded with various medals and trophies. Today, women do work in fire bridage, army, etc and various other sectors out of which I have named a few. Therefore today both are standing together independently to serve the nation as a whole.
Like every coin has two sides, their are some sectors wherein women mostly are not equally suited as that of men. For instance, consider chemical plants wherein mostly womens are not allowed to work inside the plant because of some physical differences.
To conclude, today mostly women and men work together in almost all sectors to serve the nation together. We should not distinguish between both and they should be equally treated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88793103448 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44102556857 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497126436782 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1744225255 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.05 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296645085902 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896085123611 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769765091168 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180971688811 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101423496775 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.