In some areas of the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
Teenagers in certain parts of the United States cannot go outside their homes in the night after a specific time without an adult who was accompany them due to the fact this situation leads children getting crime and juvenile delinquency.
Violent crimes are most likely to occur at night, and some accidents such as snatchers occur in children who go alone. Snatchers commit crimes in insufficient places because they currently believe that no one can eliminate them. As a result, when it happens, yelling to ask for help is useless. According to the BBC report claim that 80% of violent crimes occur between 10 pm to 3 am, and when the police officer asks one of the snatchers, they claim that a woman who goes alone is the most likely target. Although most crimes occur at night, this might happened during the day if they cannot protect themselves. Crime such snatchers, not the only accident that occurs at night, but also juvenile delinquency.
Why does juvenile delinquency also occur at night? There is a strong relationship between students going out at night and delinquency because in the US drugs are almost trafficked at night, and drug dealers want to invest in young people, especially teenagers to increase addiction in the community to increase their drug market. In fact, teens who abuse drugs are more likely to struggle with addiction later in life and have permanent and irreversible brain damage. A 2018 National Institute on Drug Abuse (NIDA) reports that drug abuse is a growing problem among teens, and the majority of them were caught using drugs at night in several clubs. Although most drug abuse occurs at night, it cannot be claimed that all teens who carry out their activities at night are drug users because drug abuse can also occur during the day if a child is not supervised by parents.
In conclusion, I totally agree when the US applies the law that teens are not allowed to go alone after a certain time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult because some crime is happening right now. However, police officers should enhance security because some activities should be organized at night.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accompanied'.
Suggestion: accompanied
... specific time without an adult who was accompany them due to the fact this situation lea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89315068493 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47513587845 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517808219178 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8892029527 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217466753405 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850693270425 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763449618258 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164007192255 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824531209786 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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