Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It is important to take care of our planet, because earth is the only home we have. Some people say that human activities makes earth a better place to live, while others disagree and say that we are harming our planet with our actions. In my view, hman activities are destroying earth. I am going to explain why in the following paragraphs.
First, ther is a lot of carbon emission, which is the result of human activities. The emission of carbon and other greenhouse gases, results in climate change. With climate change, thew eather patterns also change and it becomes more and more difficult to predict the weather. Also, the changes in weather patterns causes many natural phenomenas such as wildfires, hurrcanes, droughts and floods. These natural disasters in turn contribute to many social and economical problems. For example, I heard in the news that many of the residents in south asian countries have lost their homes, farms and possessions due to a unpredicted torrent that came sooner than expected and took with it everything they had and destroyed their homes. As a result many of them are now homeless, and with no money. So, their government has to take care of them and compensate for their lost possessions. Also many of them have became climate refugees, meaning that they heve fled to neighboring countries to avoid the storms, and are living in camps and in horrible situations. As you can see, all of these problems is a consequent of our own actions.
Second, human activities has resulted habitat destrution. Because of our actions, many wildlife animals have lost their natural habitat. Thus, their population is declining and they are gradually being extinct. And because of that, ecosystems are now out of balance and are collapsing. Deforestation is another vivid example of this destruction. Currently, huge areas of forests are burning across the globe, mainly for beneficial and agricultural purposes. For instance, I have been following the recent news of the amazon forest. For the past few weeks it has been burnung, and many of the indigenous people have lost their homes and have no where to go. This disaster not only rsults in the habitat loss of many wild life species, but it also emmits more carbon into the air, which contributes to the heating of the planet and the climate change. So, because of our actions, the planet is obviously hurting.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that we are harming our planet through our actions. By Continuing to put more carbon in the air and also by deforestation and habitat destruction. I believe that it is time to put an end to this intentional damages. I think prople should know about all the negative impacts that come from our actions.
- Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- The 20th century saw the use of fossil fuels such as coal, gas, and oil as the predominant sources of energy for our society. But, with their use have come a number of serious problems, such as their limited availability and the question of global warming 3
- Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer 73
- Standardized testing 73
- nuclear energy 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...s in turn contribute to many social and economical problems. For example, I heard in the n...
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Line 5, column 618, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eir homes, farms and possessions due to a unpredicted torrent that came sooner th...
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Line 5, column 886, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... compensate for their lost possessions. Also many of them have became climate refuge...
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Line 5, column 909, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ost possessions. Also many of them have became climate refugees, meaning that they hev...
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Line 9, column 642, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...s people have lost their homes and have no where to go. This disaster not only rsu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2281.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93722943723 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65334418761 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512987012987 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7831512543 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4642857143 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89285714286 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.85842293907 441% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112208001681 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313911254219 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606323647368 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883798592869 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918708317612 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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