In some countries, people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons for this? How to change their negative attitude?
The prosperity of international tourism recent years has brought economic development in some countries. However, at the same time it makes inhabitants constantly complain about it. In this essay I will analyse the possible reasons and take some feasible solutions to alter the residents' negative emotions.
While bringing huge revenues to the destinations, the growing number of tourists also have caused harmfulness to these countries. One of the most obvious influences is environmental deterioration. This is mainly because it is overcrowded in almost all those well-renowned tourist attractions regardless of whether tourists undermine the environment intentionally or not. Besides, with more tourists flock in, tourism has inevitably interrupted the locals' tranquil life. This phenomenon also result in the rising of living cost, which makes their daily life more inconvenient. Finally, some tourists do not respect the local's custom or religious beliefs, which sometimes even lead to the conflict between locals and foreign tourists.
Considering the latent adverse impacts on international tourism, several effective measurements should be adopted by the authorities of destination countries. Firstly, they should introduce more strict law to prevent tourists from damaging the environment. For example, abusive behaviours such as dropping litter about or making noise in public areas should be warned or even punished, in order to regulate tourists' behaviours. Furthermore, governments should also appeal to the tourists to respect the local custom. It is reasonable to print tip brochures and distribute them to the foreign tourists at the airport. In addition, subsidies could be allocated to those severely influenced areas as a compensation to those inhabitants as well.
In conclusion, the main reasons of negative attitudes are caused by the explosive amount of tourists, and local governments have responsibilities to change this situation and positively direct the residents' emotions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86054421769 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16290137618 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62925170068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4817501353 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166509314417 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482993643527 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502675287791 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107093955326 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398286591241 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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