Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
There has long been an argument whether parents should raise children in inner cities or in the countryside. Much as most couples find city life infinitely preferable to residing in a town, I wholeheartedly believe that the countryside is the best place for children to grow up in.
To commence with, life in rural areas outweigh that in the city in the way that it is capable of providing a perfect environment for children’s physical health and mental health. Spending time close to the nature, in a clean, fresh and picturesque landscape is in the service of giving children the chance to grow much more healthily and happily in preference to being glued to the screen in the city. Instead of having to live in a seriously polluted area full of vehicles and no space left for children’s playground, the farm kids are raised to put all their time and energy to fully enjoy and appreciate the spectacular view of their hometown as well as the beauty of the world. Furthermore, while children in the urban zones are put under so much pressure of being successful like others, leading to anxiety and depression, parents in the countryside have no worries about their children’s mental state. Their kids are brought up as normally as possible by not putting too much burden on them and allowing them to do whatever they want, which is highly likely to make them become a happy person with positive thoughts and an energetic soul.
Apart from that, children being born in rural area can not be considered inferior to the one coming from urban area in terms of their potential capacities. Adaptability, one of the most crucial skills for future jobs are more likely to be fostered and nurtured in a farm kid. It takes all their childhood to explore the world, to try new things and experience and challenge themselves whenever they come to a new place. Therefore, they will be more adaptable to a completely new environment and always turn the difficulties into their advantages. Moreover, by means of spending most of their time outside learning and discovering actively, engage in more varied and elaborate play patterns, their creativity will be encouraged and developed in order to be utilized to make big changes and achieve incredible feats in the future.
To sum up, I totally disagree that it is better to raise children in the city rather than in the countryside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...city rather than in the countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90663390663 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82140706435 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550368550369 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3105376095 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.615384615 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3076923077 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166298083946 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063661141456 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645277502089 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13367476891 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730756454115 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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