Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Young adults indeed finished higher education have a more successful career path than people going to jobs after higher secondary. This essay will discuss the importance of graduating from college or university.
Some believe that school graduates going to job give a better life, and quickly settle down in their life. They become to lead a comfortable life and earning money as soon as complete the schooling. In addition, it helps them to magnify their skills which further assist to grow to be an independent individual to take care of themselves. In some cases, the family also gets benefited who depends on their ward’s salary.
On the other hand, I would strongly believe that graduates from college or university receive more benefits. This is because, in the technology world, many jobs require minimum academic qualifications, it is, therefore, college graduates obtain a lot of chances to scale up a good position in the industry and earn higher salaries. Besides, pursuing higher education helps a person to gain substantial knowledge and hands-on experience on certain tasks which need of the day, for example, in the recent industrial revolution called Industry 4.0. Thus, passing out from institution have more scope to attain a good position in the competitive world.
In conclusion, at least a degree completion can help the people to become a prosperous personality as well as support to family and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23376623377 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8225772175 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662337662338 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.903934081 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.9 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184127130756 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070254565184 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666021603653 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972278330253 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354993677209 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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