Technology makes life complex, and makes it simple is to stop using technology.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As modern technology develops, various changes have appeared in our daily life. In the past few centuries, it is hard to believe that computers and other high-tech machines can play an indispensable role in our daily life. However, in this digital age, we cannot imagine our life without the help of technology. Therefore, accompanying by technology, I do believe, is a simple way for life.
As a result of technology improvement, many works can be done by technology instead of humans, which adds lots of convenience in people’s daily life. It is the appearance of technology, especially intelligent home system, that saves us from some daily cleaning at homes. So clearing up after work by ourselves is no more considered to be a necessity. With the help of technology, human beings who just need to simply give orders to machines may have more time to release themselves, instead of being busy with cleaning.
In addition, with the advent of technology, efficiency can be improved, making people’s life simpler than before. Technology highly enhance efficiency, especially the travel efficiency. Hundreds of years ago when we did not have vehicles and airplanes, it might take weeks to go to another city. Also, we might spare much more efforts, if not having mobiles and apps, to book hotels and tickets. Only when we lose modern technology can we realize how simple and convenient our daily life is.
Admittedly, it is complex and time-consuming to make the full of technology if you never learn how to use high-tech machines. For example, it is impossible for some people who never see a computer to use it immediately. It is generally accepted that learning and understanding how to operation automatic machines always takes time and efforts, especially for old people. Old people cannot accept and use the new technological innovation as quickly as young people so living in a society where is full of technology is complicated for them.
All in all, the benefits technology provides, as far as I concerned, outweigh the complexity they give in the beginning. Developing technology is regarded as a must-to-do for country and learning the operation of technology is also a must for individuals in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 17, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'benefits'' or 'benefit's'?
Suggestion: benefits'; benefit's
...plicated for them. All in all, the benefits technology provides, as far as I concer...
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Line 17, column 256, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...chnology is also a must for individuals in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14480874317 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05216694715 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560109289617 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6792900271 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1052631579 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2631578947 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218450726776 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677735030112 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620590837868 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11537807881 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287946948821 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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