Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea? Support your opinion with reasons and/or your personal experience.
The topic of life experience compared to books or formal books has become a heated debate among authorities. Although many people assert that education is far more important than having job, the others refute this proposal saying that experience plays an important role in human education and knowledge. This essay will discuss why experience is necessary for human beings than studying books and lead a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of arguments which ascertain why experience have positive impacts on people in which the most preponderant one is experience will enhance inter personal skills and abilities to excel in life. Students having jobs during their study life are more knowledgeable and brilliant than their counter peers. For example, a study proved that interships or part time jobs can help students to find jobs easily and cope with up coming life experiences. Thus, experience is very necessary with education to improve personalities.
Another pivotal aspect of the factor would be that experience provide confidence which cannot be achieved by just studying academic courses. Youngsters who have experience during school or university life are more confident than their class fellows and form good social relationships which help them later in life. For instance, a survey revealed that about 80% of the successful people are those who remained attached with experiences during their earlier life. Hence, experience is a key factor in success.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the importance of experienced based learning in terms of improving skills and confidence. Therefore, in my opinion, governments should develop understanding between academics and industry to gain this target.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...mple, a study proved that interships or part time jobs can help students to find jobs eas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60227272727 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80689485848 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0422937732 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.769230769 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263681358879 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946864055233 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404689914044 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150217802749 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598575209277 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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