write a letter to your senior professor at university regarding the change of course
-write which course you are pursuing currently
-explain why you want to change
-explain to which course you want to change
Dear Mr.Sharma,
I'm writing to let you know that i want to change my course in which i'm enrolled in my college now.
Currently enrolled in computer science and engineering course, I would like to change to a new one. Kindly inform me if this would be possible. I heard that the last date for the change of course is 5th of june which is only six days from now and my friends were discussing that beyond this date it is difficult to change the course.
The course has subjects like object oriented programming and web technology which is mostly programming oriented. I find programming to be very tough. In addition to this, the computer architecture subject is also very difficult to understand as it is a theoretical one.
The civil engineering course has no programming lessons and consists of many practical subjects such as engineering graphics and construction oriented projection. Consequently, this course will be more interesting when compared with computer subjects. And hence, I request you to change my course and provide with the procedure that has to be carried out for changing the course.
I apologise for any inconvenience this many cause to you and look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Gayathri Mohandas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sharma
Dear Mr.Sharma, Im writing to let you...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr.Sharma, Im writing to let you know that i want t...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Mr.Sharma, Im writing to let you know that i want to ...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... Im writing to let you know that i want to change my course in which im en...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which im enrolled in my college now. Currently enrolled in computer science a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it is difficult to change the course. The course has subjects like object orie...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nderstand as it is a theoretical one. The civil engineering course has no prog...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... carried out for changing the course. I apologise for any inconvenience this m...
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Line 11, column 55, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cause seems to be countable; consider using: 'many causes'.
Suggestion: many causes
... I apologise for any inconvenience this many cause to you and look forward to hearing from...
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Line 15, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely, Gayathri Mohandas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, look, so, as to, in addition, of course, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03365384615 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90524275509 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552884615385 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.970703231 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312659004969 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998372590993 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947521726482 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146481843734 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104532665469 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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