Discuss the problems and solutions related to environmental concern?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals environmental concern has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain its effect on individuals. Regarding this, I believe that it is happening mainly due to negligence of the individual and it can be solved by implementing the measures mentioned in the essay.
There are several reasons for rapid rise in environmental pollution. First of all there is a rapid increase in the population level of large global cities. As a result, there is a demand of more transport facilities, which ultimately raise the issue of pollution. Another reason is that people are not well educated. They don’t know the importance of having a clean and green environment. Due to this, people are using the natural resources unknowingly without keeping in mind their effect on our ecosystem.
However, there are various steps that we could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, government should made stringent legal rules regarding pollution control. The running party should make sure that all are following the regulations. Secondly, they should organize campaign and educate the poor individuals regarding the importance of sustainability. A third opinion would be, individual should see themselves as a responsible citizen of their society and should take care of natural resources and should avoid the rapid cutting down of trees.
Hence, based on arguments above, I want to stress that environmental problems are rising due to inappropriate contents and security loopholes. Nonetheless, we could certainly implement a range of measures mentioned in this essay to mitigate them in a timely manner.
- Discuss the problems and solutions related to environmental concern? 11
- We have entered a throw away society and fill the environment with rubbish what are the causes and what are your solutions? 77
- Using formal written assessment is still a valid task.what extent to agree or disagree. 77
- Successful sportsstars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)PTE Academic , PTE ESSAYS , Writing 72
- advantages and disadvantages of using credit card? 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 247, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a timely manner" with adverb for "timely"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...entioned in this essay to mitigate them in a timely manner.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, well, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00452818153 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1549912322 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0792475901082 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240755900948 0.0925447433944 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448562835394 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498068760699 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314159864034 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.