A nation should requires all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
At the first glance, a national curriculum might be a good idea. It would be ideal to conduct a program where students manage to acquire same level of knowledge and graduate with the same set of skills. However, the fact is that not every student is the same as every other student. Some may argue that an established national curriculum might save school districts from developing their own material. Other may argue for a different reasons that different states or provinces in a country might not all be able to afford material at the same cost. It is unfeasible to assume the commensurateness among every groups and individuals, unless they are willing to give up control over their own career path for a generalize education.
First and foremost, it is a onerous task to prepare for a national curriculum material wise. In developing regions such as Africa and South East Asia, there are countries with low GDP, where indigence is a bigger problem than buying book for school. A child might be forced on child labor at their very young age, from doing restaurant work, selling at a store to even physical labor work. A family does not simply make enough to have food day by day. A considerable amount of family in those countries could not afford education for the child. An average of a list of numbers close to zero is approximately zero, therefore a national curriculum of no education is not an option. On the other hand, it is superficial to assume that developed countries have their problem solved. In fact, developed countries face some of their own problem. In a country with diverse population such as the United States, people come from different culture and speak different languages. Immigrant culture might influence a place greater than other place. Therefore, finding a common ground among a wide range of population is burdensome, plus the financial and technical challenge up to support it adds up to impossible.
Secondly, not every student has the same level of understanding of a subject. Some of the cores subjects for general education purpose under college level are: math, literature, science and art. It is rare to see a student who excels in finding limits and integration, having lasting memories about geography, history, literary work and poem, and having a comprehensive understanding about the difference between Renaissance art and Medieval art, as well as producing art work by oneself. Not to say it is an impossible task, but one must spend a great amount of time studying and practicing a subject again and again to be able to perform, even greater if the subject does not come naturally. And there are a plethora of other social and career skills that parents hope their children could learn. Does a student have enough time to focus on school subject as well as elective program, and socialize and being healthy at the same time?
Last but not least, it is necessary to have a separate program for highschool students to facilitate better understanding and preparation for the specialized subject. Highschool is an important milestone of education for every child because it prepares for college. It is when students have a certain understanding of the world and ready to decide which career path they want to follow. Some career requires longer training period that others. For example, a computer science major requires 4 year education. However, a brutal fact is that technology accelerates leading to high level of competition in job industry. An outstanding GPA at school might lose to 1-2 year real industry experience with regular school performance on resume. By starting early, the student will have better edge at competing on the field. The same does not only apply for computer science but for nearly all other major. Specialized program helps tremendously on preparing students for the future, saving time and effort to decide to change a major before college instead of doing it during college.
In the end, promoting the educational well-being of our children is a laudable purpose. It is a bless to enjoy the alacrity and creativity of our children. Therefore, decision to develop one's child should be left for the parent/guardian, who cares for the child at heart.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3545.0 2235.4752809 159% => OK
No of words: 707.0 442.535393258 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01414427157 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.15649799773 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7935656088 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 342.0 215.323595506 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483734087694 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1132.2 704.065955056 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.2370786517 178% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5326986629 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4722222222 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6388888889 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160990758134 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402075863773 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447553696007 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867766363592 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609284176457 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 100.480337079 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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