Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life.
What are the reasons?
What are the effects on society and family life?
It is true that youngsters in modern society in recent years prefer to give birth later in their life. There are some reasons for this trend and its consequences will affect on society and family life in many different ways.
Firstly, we come up with two main reasons why people make a decision to have children later. On the one hand, many individuals consider that building their own successful careers is top-priority. It’s an appropriate perspective for the requirements and developing process of most of the developed countries where people want to dedicate themselves on working especially when they’re young. Besides, delaying childbirth could give young people countless opportunities to enjoy their life. Without entanglement about parental involvements, youngsters could be free of any kinds of their own family-relating responsibilities and they could have much more time to take care of their parents or even themselves.
Secondly, we also need to discuss the effect that this trend may lead to. First, when you have children too late, then raising children could be a huge challenge for older parents. You’re older and experiencing much in your own life doesn’t mean you will have enough understanding and suitable skills about how to raise a kid. With tons of problems come out when you have your first child then you will realize how embarrassing you are even when you’re a middle-aged parent. Furthermore, you have to be cautious when you getting pregnant after 35 years of age because it will oftentimes carry more potential health risks that will have an effect on the quality of the future workforce in the case if you unluckily meet some serious problems during the process of pregnant and give birth an unhealthy child.
In conclusion, about the trend of getting married and have children late, we absolutely could see clearly why people choose it and how its results could affect on society specifically on the smaller range which is family unit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20987654321 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87291636721 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.94184634 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.846153846 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242227350111 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918326717636 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547378245801 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161250344549 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609760482344 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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