The news media have too much influence on people’s lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that news media nowadays plays a vital role on daily life that couldn’t replace by anything else at this moment but for some reasons, many people think it caused some bad influences for the development in general. I could partly agree with this point of view because we couldn’t wipe out all of its positive effects in our life.
On the one hand, I will stand with negative perspectives about news media because during the period of time that sees a dramatically increasing of media all over the world, it’s quite easy to write something and spread it out on the internet and we all have to deal with one of the huge problems which is fake news that will cost us not only the massive damage about finance but also about mental trauma. One simple example, imagine when we see some untruthful stories about other people except one thing that we don’t know those news are false when we’re surfing the internet then we may have some inappropriate behaviors or feelings with that person such as prejudice or sense of hating or even something worse. Those things will lead us to a serious viciousness, feeling uncontrolled and drowning slowly among disinformation.
On the other hand, I will talk about the positive features of news media. As you can see, we’ve been in the Industrial Revolution 4.0, followed by an explosion of media specifically via the internet. This could help us stay up-to-date with anything happens around the world, stay discuss and give out our own opinions. With the big support of news media, we can approach any fields in the blink of an eye and become a more knowledgeable individual. I can quickly access any one of the most popular information sources in the globe such as CNN, BBC, National Geographic,… and searching for some news I care about or finding somewhere desire for some little help, for example, I usually donate one online newspaper then they will allocate the money for different charitable purposes.
In conclusion, even though some negative influences of news media are still existing but we couldn’t deny all of its positive factors that have changed our lives in many ways, so, I couldn’t say that news media is just all about bad development of human beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...xcept one thing that we don't know those news are false when we're surfing the i...
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Line 9, column 574, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...be such as CNN, BBC, National Geographic,… and searching for some news I care abou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, then, even so, for example, in conclusion, in general, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91948051948 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71749639226 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.879562476 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.181818182 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198043942198 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816978816416 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055582638188 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141465290569 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043471404584 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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