The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem. What problem will this shortage of time causes.
In the developing world, it is a debatable issue these days that some people believe that people who are a devotee to job gives very little time to their family and it creates bigger problems in homes as well. I personally believe that this fact is undeniable so we will discuss on this point into forthcoming paragraphs and will reach to a plausible conclusion.
To begin, There is no doubt that money is the basic need of every individual in this era and to earn money people have to leave their homes and some time also for a long time also so employees could not be able to give time to their family because sometimes even they have not time to consume food because of peer pressure of job work. Undeniably, It leads to myriads of problems and family conflicts are a general concern.
In every organization, some employees do extra work to earn more and most of the days they reached home late so the person does not give time to all the family members. it leads to destroying a family relationship and sometime increased conflicts leads to divorce also between husband and wife. Moreover, sometime children also go out off listen to their parents.
In the capsulation, Both job and family are equally important so these should be maintained to live incredible life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ot give time to all the family members. it leads to destroying a family relationsh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68888888889 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54044226732 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1027812406 50.4703680194 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.875 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280920750452 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101085467973 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887449292423 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160574183594 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10576626466 0.0609392437508 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.94827586207 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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