Some people believe the aims of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe are much wider benefit of university education for both individuals and society.
People have different views of the aim of university education. Although some students make a choice to go to the university just for a better jobs, others realize that university education has further advantages for both individuals and society.
It is clearly to admit the one of the most important functions of university is to secure a good career. Students consider that university is the quickest way to improve their future and increase a person 's marketable skills so that they can make a better impression for employers. Through university, students can create a brighter and happier life.
The truth is university were born not only for individual but also for society. Firstly, It seem like a favorite place where employers find their employees. Secondly, Apparently, the independence of living away from home is a benefit because it help the students develop better social skills and improve as a person. A case in point is that many students will have to leave their families, live in a hall of residence and meet new friends. As the result, their maturity and confidence will grow enabling them to live more fulfilling lives.
In conclusion, I have confess that though a main aim of university education is to get a better future. If we continue to promote and encourage university attendance, it will lead to a better world.
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- Some people believe the aims of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe are much wider benefit of university education for both individuals and society. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...idual but also for society. Firstly, It seem like a favorite place where employers f...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... away from home is a benefit because it help the students develop better social skil...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'confessed'.
Suggestion: confessed
...lfilling lives. In conclusion, I have confess that though a main aim of university ed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98222222222 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84116477592 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4069755528 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4166666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337633645681 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115034008345 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121274387637 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221733499655 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140050584002 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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