the disadvantage of Internet
Developing technology is an important part in developing one country, especially Internet. The growth of Internet exert many positive impacts on our life. However, this widespread still have many negative effects on the human life. In this essay, the bad influences are going to be shown, also search for solutions.
To begin with, one of the most obvious disadvantages is that surfing the internet has become a way of life for all age of people, which make people do not interact much with the life such as friends, family. There is no denying the fact that the internet is the powerful invention because of many sort of functions, however people can easily to get addiction and dependence because of this big data, people can spend almost the time in day just for only surfing the Internet for many reasons. That why people cannot concentrate with all might on studying or working.
Another is that Internet Usage affect directly on our body health. People can seat for hours in front of the computer or smart phone for accessing to the Internet for entertainment, our eyes are going to be bad time by time, not only hours eyes but also our heart and easy to be obese. Lack of physical exercise can influence on the growth of people’s body. People who addicted Internet and do not hang out much may get depression.
To solve these problems, the government should connect with the education systems to create more inspirational and directed activities for people realize the double-edged impact of Internet. From that, people can learn how to use it effectively.
In summary, internet is the best invention in this decade, but it is difficult to ignore the negative impacts on human life. People should consider the way to use Internet to get the best for your life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sort seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sorts'.
Suggestion: many sorts
...et is the powerful invention because of many sort of functions, however people can easily...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, in summary, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86842105263 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61388583371 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1726985322 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246317369433 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840555153798 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649973031927 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136084343176 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398919483874 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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