Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In modern times the issue of government funding is highly controversial. Although there are few people who do not want the government to spend money in art and cultures, others believe that they should spend on it. In this essay I'll discuss both views and provide my opinion.
Generally speaking there is a main reason why people believe that higher officials should not spent money in art and culture. Perhaps the main factor is funding in education system, medical field is good enough, rather than art and culture is futile by government. A good illustration is in the recent days the university of Harvard students found a black hole image which is located in the space. moreover, the doctors are trying different probes on various diseases to cure patients.
Despite these arguments there is also a case that people who support the government to invest in the art and culture. Perhaps there is a main view point is that people's hidden talent can make them successful as well as nation will be pride. For example Chinese population is one of the drawback to planet earth. but, they will take leverage of that in Olympics. Furthermore today's generation is tomorrow's nation builders.
In conclusion this is the essay which is very relevant to modern society. Despite arguments to the contrary I feel that government to invest in education and medical so that there is more scope in it. If the rulers of country would bolstering in above departments then there could be vital change for nation pride.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90234375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55383622571 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3963904507 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24957151844 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646669482442 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576388783949 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131059216025 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486662382055 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.