The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The number of people who gain excess weight are increasing tremendously. Many people believe that health care system is putting effort to prevent diseases, which relate to health. Hence, it is often argued that more physical education lessons in schools reduce these health related diseases. I think that creating physical education lessons for children in schools is essential to deal with these diseases.
First of all, introducing physical lessons promotes balanced foods among children. If the lessons are provided on diet foods or healthy foods, the children will be motivated to adopt these foods. Some people strongly believe that following a particular food, such as meat or vegetables, is healthy, but adopting only either meat or vegetables might be proven a malnutrition food content. For instance, doctors today are recommending children and other patients to strictly follow a well-balanced foods, which consist of both meat and vegetables along with a range of vitamins. Hence, lessons encourage children to adopt well-balanced foods that lead to prevent health related diseases.
Secondly, physical lessons motivate children for physical exercises. Most children in schools are extremely busy with their study. As a result, they do not get enough time to involve in physical exercises that result overweight. If teachers provide physical lessons regarding interesting sports in schools, then children will get encouraged to play these sports willingly. For example, lecturers may include indoor games especially cricket, football, basketball etc. to encourage children to participate. Therefore, if children willingly play these games, they will be able to get rid of excess weight. Hence, physical education lessons promotes physical exercise that ultimately diminish health problems.
To sum up, excess weight leads to health problems that can be minimized by providing more health related lessons in schools. I firmly believe that these lessons motivate children to adapt and follow balanced foods and physical exercises, which result in the fall of health diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71326630815 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8232731412 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9473684211 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.68421052632 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2509411253 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870611602656 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739305199917 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180312225769 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105076794273 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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