People should follow the local customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Nowadays, many people travel and stay in a foreign country for jobs and studies. Many people have the opinion that foreigners should follow the customs and traditions when they start to live in a new country because that is necessary for them. I agree with them.
Some people have another view. They think that trying to learn and follow the local customs and traditions is not essential. Plus, it maybe will affect their country because each place has different traditions. Their opinions are not wrong. However, they do not know that there are also many difficulties do not familiar with local traditions. The first disadvantage is the foreigners will be social isolation. They should blend into surrounding people or things, that is one of the norms of social behavior. Secondly, if the integration does not follow the rules of the host country, they must have some pitfalls. They bound to fall foul of the law.
Furthermore, for business, there will be many difficulties for them facing. For example, hard to start a company, cannot communicate with any partners. They must be aware of the business practices.
The benefits of following the local customs and traditions are the reason I agree with it. Firstly, the residents will be welcome in the host country. The local people will think they are friendly and kind. After that, they can easily make foreign friends, which is a perfect thing, especially for entrepreneurs. More than that, they can gain mutual understanding; they can share customs and traditions. Secondly, newcomers will enjoy the traditions and be able to take part in community life. Therefore, immigrants allow enjoying the host country’s festivals. Furthermore, following the local customs and traditions are a suitable time for the people who start living in a new country to gain more knowledge.
According to those benefits above, I highly suggest that new immigrants should follow the local customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. That is essential for them to not get into trouble. However, you can not forget your originally country traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13005780347 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72400952139 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471098265896 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8406130409 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2692307692 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3076923077 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73076923077 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348933723859 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950012795831 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124710040781 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223001551283 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120669146353 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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