In order to reduce crime, we need to attack the causes of crime such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. It is not enough to simply have more police in the street and put more people into prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
Violation against the law is one of the growing concerns of the modern society. Here it is said that to decrease committing illegal activities, we are supposed to eradicate the root cause of this problem like improving the living status and giving education and so on. In this essay, we will discuss both the sides and give my opinion at the end.
On one hand, it is true that the main cause that led a person to commit a crime is their own situation. Many are doing these acts against the law because they don't have any way for their livelihood. If we help them to find a solution for their day-to-day life, then we can reduce it to some extent. Furthermore, employing the government servants like police on duty alone wont help to bring down the number of evil behaviors. Besides, moral education should be provided to all from their childhood. As an optimum example, in India, the crime rate slumped from 80% to 30% within a decade because of education that taught every one of social morals. As a result, we can build a better society.
On the other hand, some people are born criminals. Even though they have better education and high acceptance in the society, they end up doing illegal activities. Moreover, some antisocial elements are using religious belief to spread their antisocial behavior. There are many who involve themselves in activities that disrupt the peace of a nation. As an impeccable instance, a well-known family in Srilanka whose ancestors were patriots of the nation, was involved in the suicide bomb attacks that happened just a few months ago. As a consequence, the efforts that are made to avoid such circumstances are totally in void.
To conclude, not only education and punishments are important but also the monitoring and social involvement are necessary to get rid of social crimes. In my opinion I partially agree with the statement that by providing basic facilitates will help to minimize the social evil to some extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...ave any way for their livelihood. If we help them to find a solution for their day-to-day life, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86646884273 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6495874475 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59940652819 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6702457147 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1111111111 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141466900235 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370128594368 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252372500781 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720839827589 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338513386691 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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