In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. what are the changes occurring ? Do you think these changes are positive or negative ?
As per the current society there are two types of family structures namely, joint families and nuclear families. A typical joint family is composed of grand parents, parents, parents siblings and all children. On other hand, nuclear families are composed of only two parents and one or two children. I certainly agree that there has been this transition from joint to nuclear family because of various reasons which I am going to delineate in the following paragraphs. In addition to that, in most of the families male individuals generally earn and take care about the outside world and the female will take care of house-hold activities. Now a days, it is also apparent that there has been a lot of woman empowerment and the changes in the roles are clearly visible. I strongly believe that both of the aforesaid has a positive impact on the current society. Hence, I am taking a stance to support the changes.
Family structure changes can be happening because of various reasons. One can be financial burdens. It is a well known fact that the cost of living in a city is way more higher than a village. It is only possible to live in a city like Bangalore only if every elderly person in the family earns a decent amount of money. Another factor can be the wishes and goals. In a joint family there will be a lot of sacrifices and compromises in achieving goals which are not desired by any individual now a days. In recent times, people are trying to be independent and living their life in solitude. There are several other factors which force one family to become a nuclear family. However, there are some demerits associated in being a nuclear family like, emotional support, affections and relations etc. One should always be ready for the merits and demerits of family type which they are willing to be part of.
The roles of father and mother are changing as result of various reasons. Its no longer an age for any woman to sit at home and sacrifice her entire career for kitchen. There has been lot of opportunities for woman now a days in almost all industries. Woman going out into the outside world has two positive effects. One, the woman will understand the day-to-day hurdles that a man faces. Second, the man also understands the daily household problems that woman is facing. In a way, both will understand each other in a better way which helps them lead a happy life. It is impossible to know someone's problems until we are in their position. If you do not care about each other in a family then it will be impossible to create a happy family. As families are building blocks of society, the society also prospers if families prosper.
In short, society is made of families, if families are developed and happy then the society automatically achieves the same. In any family, the father should understand mother and vice versa, then only a happy family can be made.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 641, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ill take care of house-hold activities. Now a days, it is also apparent that there has bee...
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Line 1, column 645, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...take care of house-hold activities. Now a days, it is also apparent that there has bee...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...hat the cost of living in a city is way more higher than a village. It is only possible to ...
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Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...which are not desired by any individual now a days. In recent times, people are trying to ...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...h are not desired by any individual now a days. In recent times, people are trying to ...
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Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... changing as result of various reasons. Its no longer an age for any woman to sit a...
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Line 9, column 216, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...has been lot of opportunities for woman now a days in almost all industries. Woman going o...
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Line 9, column 643, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...roblems until we are in their position. If you do not care about each other in a f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, second, so, then, well, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 13.1623246493 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2397.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 509.0 315.596192385 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70923379175 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52954565281 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475442043222 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.0 506.74238477 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5743390887 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36666666667 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203620961707 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538135115391 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526699389747 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12184284535 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329692054935 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.