Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using internet.
There is no doubt that using internet has become one of the most pressing issues in modern society. There are those who say that using internet brings a lot of benefits however others feel that internet has affected our life badly. This essay will examine the positive perspectives and drawbacks of this issue before providing my overall opinion.
From overall perspective there is a number of advantages in using internet. Using internet undoubtedly made our life more and more flexible. Nobody has ever visualized this huge world will be as small as village by the time. This improvement is surely attributed to the internet. As a result, people can get wide range of information faster than they expected. In addition, they can know what is happening not only in the place where they live, but also all over the world. Furthermore, many goods are available to be sold just by pressing a button.
Despite this argument, there are also various disadvantages of using internet. As much as the internet created new jobs, it alleviated other opportunities that was existent before. A good illustration of this is a post man career. Moreover, the connection between the members of the family has become less tight after internet effects. As well as their lifestyle recently depends on using internet even they invite each other to have a dinner in the same house.
In conclusion, using internet is a topic which raises some questions in contemporary life. Having considered both sides of the issue. I'm convinced that getting benefits or drawbacks from internet still depends on the manner that people deal with. So, internet users should be aware of that, because using internet is absolutely double edged weapon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 430, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'have dinner'.
Suggestion: have dinner
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Line 13, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ing considered both sides of the issue. Im convinced that getting benefits or draw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08802816901 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64038493644 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7575501229 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0526315789 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9473684211 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345574650263 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105551405403 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105517156567 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207411410751 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027765009448 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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