Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
In the 21st century, most people doesn't aware of the story behind the religious festival and they know that festivals just to enjoy and posting pictures on social media. I completely agree with this opinion and think that the young generation is enjoying holidays rather than celebrating it. First of all, I believe that traditional things are disappearing as the day goes then one fine day they will forget the date of Independence day itself if it is continued like this. It is responsible for parents, schools to teach children about ancient things like they have to arrange a tour with family in an ancestor place so that children will get to know. The students will learn in social studies but they will forget as they grew up and they learn so marks only and after exams, they completely forget everything as new things came into life. Some people will work on the festival also they don't believe in those things just for the sake of the money. For example, in Uk one of the news channels made a survey on the independence day like live questions will be asked in front of cameras and the result is the 80% of the even don't know when they got freedom itself. Secondly, not everyone forgot the dates and procedures of the festivals but lack of memory they might of past history or how festival forged. However, the government helps those who want to serve the country, for them an entrance exam has conducted and the exam questions contain about the history of the country. For instance, IAS exams will be conducted every year in India and the question will be asked based on the history of India and current affairs and many more topics; most of the students study more than 2 years to pass IAS exams. The Schools and colleges, need to conduct exams on our history country through which everyone will get to know or program can be arranged. In conclusion, the reason behind the religious festival is not aware most of the young generations because they are enjoying holidays and they have no idea how to celebrate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6295264624 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36368004206 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523676880223 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.8660556047 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9166666667 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134089250115 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596511061748 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747349663072 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134089250115 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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