some people prefer to gain information from their experience. others prefer to gain information from books
discuss both sides and give your opinion
These days there are a lot of places to start learning and getting intelligence. So, some people think that they can get more knowledge from their experience which they did in the work before. While others believe that they can earn the information from the books. This essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.
In one hand, gaining knowledge from books is easy and makes you open-minded. For example, Mohammed Ali started his career from school by reading myriad of books which is why he is becoming a scientist now by means of books which means he just has stayed in his house. So that’s why he thinks some nations appreciate reading books.
On the other hand, the vast majority of people believe in getting large in number of knowledge by what they knew before or what they did among their professions and become knowledgeable. To illustrate, the most part of Yemeni population are producing and working aptly and learning from their mistakes to be essential expert provided that if they get a lot of problems in their career, they should not to be humiliated. This proves clearly that some people prefer to earn information from their practice.
In conclusion, after a careful analysis of both points of view, I believe that you can gain more information from your experience than reading books, because any job that you have should not be forgettable which is why the information that you made from books can be forgotten.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ence which they did in the work before. While others believe that they can earn the i...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: large
...t majority of people believe in getting large in number of knowledge by what they knew before o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.888 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59353349699 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.257574169 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.090909091 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329186868617 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124811099129 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967517853165 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187319495044 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330215618487 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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