The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The author argue that the leadership of students depends on the cooperation, not competition. even though the young people learn copious of knowledgement throughout working the individually, I agree with the opinion of author. The following essay will discuss the pros and cons on the topic to strengthen author's stance.
Admittedly, the competition have powerful points to develope leadership in competitive situation. If the students work alone not working as a unified group, a person might experienced and learned every process from the beginning of the setting subjects to making results. Thus, they eventually cognizant the characteristics of positions and this ability helps to increase the efficiency when they become a leader and should separate the one task to separate modules. however, we have a room to get advantages from the competition which does not competible with the cooperation.
Firstly, even though students perhaps imazine possible strugglings, they do not understand fully the total process of copperative works. Therefore, even when students collide to make a decision, they realize how to take account of actual situation because comming up with every errors during projects can hardly be possible from brain.
On top of that, the key factor to become leader is understanding the struggling of members in my groups. cooperation include the brain-storming and arguing each different opinion to direct final decision. throughout this, young people might recognize the level of difficulty of difference tasks which in they not involved and main problems to solve matters.
Lastly, great leader have to consider enable futures as much as possible, but dealing with these all options only realized through experienced to receive distinct ideas. however, considering all possibility can hardly be possible from a individual's opinion. Speaking of a case when a company faced a huge unprecedented problems for several years, experts on different areas might gather their own suggestions based on each experiences in different fields. this is the way the large company or government use to solve main tasks of our entire society.
In conclusion, some people might indicate that leaderships for elder might got from competition. Although it is true for several cases, young people would learn how to satisfy the requirements in the way of being a great leader throughout cooperation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, speaking of, it is true, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 373.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46380697051 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97039565795 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584450402145 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2738093233 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.222222222 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126509262495 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428658144643 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605865818288 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076245644733 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856029009412 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.