Large Shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion? Do you think this is a good or bad change.
The importance of shopping mall, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of large shopping malls in replacing small local shops has sparked controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. This essay will elaborate on how large shopping malls allow people to find kinds of products and how small stores are out the business because of big stores and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are many reasons why shopping malls are essential, but the most conspicuous one stems from the infrastructure of big malls facilitates consumers to shop conveniently. For example, large malls are equipped with parking spaces, lavatories, food courts, air conditioning, and entertainment areas which make them much more desirable than small shops. One can spend an entire day with their family or friends as there is something for everyone. Thus, the majority of shoppers consider large shopping malls are better in all aspects.
Nevertheless, there remain some shortcomings, which can undoubtedly overwhelm the potential effects of large shopping malls, but the most dangerous one lies in the fact that large malls are taking away local and small shops. For instance, Local shopkeepers who earn their daily bread and butter face a hard time as only a few customers buy products from their shop and the practice is much affecting the local economy. Moreover, in malls, people are tempted to buy unnecessary things, and it's not convenient for the lower and middle-class population.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the role of large shopping malls is prominent, although there remain some drawbacks that should be well handled.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28673835125 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77632289336 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7210369867 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.090909091 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265987419542 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103647323679 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714753426984 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160058268567 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525848770346 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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