You are attending a course at an evening school. Write a letter to the director of the school with a complaint about the course. In your letter, you should:
– Describe the course you are taking.
– Explain what you don’t like about the course.
– Give your opinion about what should be done about it.
Dear Mr Cameroon,
I am John from Brisbane pursuing the Integrated Computers course at your school. I am writing in regards to the inferior content this program offers.
As per the curriculum, the course was intended to advanced learners and experienced working professionals. However, I regret to inform you that upon enrolling I found the teaching modules are at a basic elementary level which was a huge disappointment to me and lot of fellow students. Added to this, the lecturer who teaches Artificial Intelligence seems to be less qualified and is inefficient in conveying the subject.
I request you to please review the course material and restructure it to advanced level as stated. I would also be grateful if the Institute could employ well-educated and knowledgeable resources to conduct the training programs for the benefit of all students.
If these measures would not be possible at the earliest, could you please arrange a refund of the tuition fee?I Look to forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
John Gresham.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ers course at your school. I am writing in regards to the inferior content this program offer...
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Line 17, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ase arrange a refund of the tuition fee?I Look to forward to hearing from you. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34319526627 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03711158456 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668639053254 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6045642644 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190520581113 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695143610955 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586970598474 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110163349965 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306963962733 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.