Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologise
• describe what action you will take
Dear Adam,
I am writing this letter to make an appology for the loud noise from my house that made you disturb.
Let me explain you my situation, surprisingly, my son George was born on 13th december, where as my daughter Jessica birthday also comes very next day of him on 14th of december. Therefore, we celebrated their birthdays last week for two consecutive days.
I'm extremely sorry for the loud music, we should have not played it until late night. Moreover, children were playing games all the night, to make the most of it, but it created an environment of a fish market for our neighbours, for which I'm very embarrassed. Please accept my appology, I promise you that I will be more considerate towards my neighbours in future.
For the future events such as birthdays or family parties, we have decided to celebrate it outside the house, or if in the house we will try to pack up everything before 5pm.
Once again, I say sorry for all the inconvenience.
Thank you
Jay Cutler
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...y son George was born on 13th december, where as my daughter Jessica birthday also comes...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...s last week for two consecutive days. Im extremely sorry for the loud music, we ...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...sh market for our neighbours, for which Im very embarrassed. Please accept my appo...
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Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... more considerate towards my neighbours in future. For the future events such as birthd...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69886363636 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67658869947 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710227272727 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7031162165 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157459481961 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651357487986 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463281983223 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852116703887 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601649343231 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.