Old age is a natural stage of life and everybody goes through this stage. In every field, we have a young generation of workers and experienced or old workers and both are required for the success of any organization. Young workers boost the quantity of output whereas old experienced workers help in maintaining the quality of output. Some people do discrimination against older workers, in my opinion, the government should make this discrimination illegal. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss it in detail.
First of all, this is against humanity as older people need more support from society and the organization must support them at that stage of life. If companies do discrimination to them, they may feel depressed and can go into mental depression. Mental depression may provoke for suicide and that is not good at all.
In addition, we have two types of workforce, mental and physical workforce. It's true that for physical workforce age matters to some extent but for the mental workforce, age is not a very big impacting factor. In both type of workforces experience also matters so older workforce can guide the young generation for better output. In many studies, it's proved that experienced workers play a very vital role in an organization's success.
To conclude, as discussed in the above paragraphs we can say that discrimination against older workers should be made illegal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, whereas, in addition, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09813084112 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93434504094 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6679540919 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.9166666667 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272672538846 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949209394209 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141248781282 0.071462118173 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203158930753 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18011457894 0.0609392437508 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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