Every person have different capabilities and different grasping power but some people are born with creativity and specific talents. These people have god gifted talents. It is also true that with hard work and constant practice one can learn new things and become expert. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss it in detail.
First, let's talk about people with god gifted talent. Some people are born with creative mind and with specific talents like Lata Mangeshkar born with a very pleasing voice, Sachin Tendulkar born with great cricketing talent. Such people show up their creativity and talent at very early stage of their life.
On the other hand, creativity and talent can be developed as well with right guidance and hardwork. Like with a good coach and good coaching facilities people become a very successful sports person. For example, cricketer Farooq Engineer born with physical disability but with hardwork he becomes a very successful and world class spin bowler. Another example is Dr. Abdul Kalam Aazad, he was born in a very poor family but with his hardwork and right guidance he became a very renowned scientist.
To conclude, I can say that some people are born with creativity and god gifted talents. However, it is also true that creativity and talent can also be developed with right guidance and constant hardwork and a person can become a good sports person or dancer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
Every person have different capabilities and different gr...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ilities people become a very successful sports person. For example, cricketer Farooq E...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02991452991 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42043751995 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7722743798 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5384615385 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348565140798 0.242375264174 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139996305098 0.0925447433944 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841878304348 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246782982774 0.151781067708 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746716333285 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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