Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays science has improved a lot my fulfilling day-to-day needs of human beings. Amongst them DNA extraction and implementation are playing an indispensable role in this upgraded community. Here it is said that some people respond to it positively while others vehemently oppose this development by saying that it will have negative impact. In this essay, we will discuss both the views and my opinion it is a positive one.
On the one hand, there are numerous fields where this genetic engineering is applied. one such branch of science is biotechnology, where a DNA strand is extracted and after processing it is introduced in another DNA. Moreover, by implementing such a scientific procedure, we can obtain not only good variety of materials but also disease resistant products. this will definitely help to increase the number of quality outputs. As a impeccable example, in Israel, a group of young scientists produced high yielding crops which gave more output than normal ones. As a result, they cultivate a very small portion of land to meet the needs of the whole country.
On the other hand, those who do not support this say that there might be many adverse effect for this. Although they are enjoying the fruitful outcome of this, they talk against the procedures followed. Furthermore, the claim that the consumption of such food products might lead to some unknown disease that may lead to deaths. As an example, some opposing supporters say that the tomatoes which are genetically produced cause cancer. As an impact, many are afraid to consume these products because of the fear for their life.
To sum up, Even though there are different views about the application of genetical engineering, I personally believe that the drawbacks are covered by the quality of products which the science gave us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12292358804 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76887528535 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624584717608 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3631131653 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158558562991 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478631119089 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468268331671 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861899371832 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524460773613 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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