Positive And Negative Effects Of Technology Information Through Mass Media
The importance of tecnology information through mass media ,which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claming that it is benifical while otherreject this notion. The substanial influence of this trendhas sparked the cotroversy over the potential impact inrecent years in my opinion the former proposition appear to be more rational .This essay will further elaborate both postive and negtive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but thge most preponderant one stems from the fact that technology is very crucial part of human life,with the help of social media we know easy and correct information about our surrounding . For instance technology is very helpful their study like ,e learning courses , for example ILETS,PTE and so on.
However, there are some pitafalls that negate these arugements and which can certanily overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that some people use technology illegal ways through social media . A few masses flow wrong rumor on social media with help of technology.for instance some channeel allow black magic advertisment , which is very harmful effect on their mind.
According to the argument aforementioned above,one can reach to aconclusion that benefits of mass media .Technology is very benifical for future are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50423728814 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85603345277 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652542372881 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.370448343 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.375 104.977214359 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.9669160288 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.875 7.25397266985 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.33497536946 300% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248064281158 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979013678422 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614960295145 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13954294623 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037226357109 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 12.6369458128 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.94827586207 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.