Some people think studying in groups is better while some think the self-study is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
These days, education is crucial for every human being. Pupil study in educational center to gain some knowledge and for their better future. People opinion differ in studying some think group study is better while other think selfstudy is good for pupil's.Therea are arguments on both sides which I will discuss in this essay.
Coming towards the first viewpoint, they believe that group study is better for school going students. they think that pupils can broaden their horizon in group study. Moreover, they can explore new ideas and techniques in group discussions. group study not only helps in study but also help pupil in their daily life communication with other people. They learn how to communicate with other people. furthermore, they learn how to represent their ideas and techniques to others. In group study, they learn from each others.
On the other side of the argument, people believe self- study is better for school students. They think that in self-study individual can concentrate more efficiently. It can boost up their self-esteem. In addition, pupil can learn at their on pace, they don't need to learn quickly as the others do in group study. It also help pupil to explore more about the project. It encourages curiosity in students to explore new ideas. It also helps students in creativity.
In conclusion, although education is important for every one. Many students like to study in groups while others prefer self-study. Considering the both sides of their arguments, in my opinion, group study is far better than self-study. group study can offer more help and knowledge, it gives opportunities to pupils to learn from each other mistakes and success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15217391304 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60289209515 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492753623188 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4203704914 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7142857143 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412229384223 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126536723905 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147131476322 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295166067564 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13006571242 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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