You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter:
Explain where your apartment is
Describe the room
What kind of person would you like to rent it to.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I have a one-room available which I would rent it out to a single student at your college.
I am living in an apart based in Canal Garden block number A which is located on the opposite side of the main road. I believe it’s just barely ten minutes’ walk for students to reach college while using the corner street road which leads to the main entrance of the college. I must say that the apartment is situated in a very handy place to live because there are no. of restaurants are nearby, and public transport is available 24/7 for students to visit the downtown area over the weekend.
I must say that my apartment is situated in a very handy place because there are no. of restaurants are nearby, and public transport is available 24/7 for students to visit downtown over the weekend. The room which I have is medium-sized with an attached washroom and inbuild cupboard for a single student to live easily. Besides, it has a terrace to walk, and a separate entrance with a key to secure the essential belongings. Since I am living with my family in an apartment; therefore, I want to rent it out to a student who will take care of the cleanliness in the room, doesn’t listen to music loudly, and a non-smoker to prevent smelling in an apartment.
Please let me know if you would have any student to live in a family and friendly environment.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... on the opposite side of the main road. I believe it's just barely ten minut...
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Line 9, column 287, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ds to the main entrance of the college. I must say that the apartment is situated...
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Line 9, column 377, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'noes', 'nos'?
Suggestion: noes; nos
...y handy place to live because there are no. of restaurants are nearby, and public ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t the downtown area over the weekend. I must say that my apartment is situated ...
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Line 11, column 82, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'noes', 'nos'?
Suggestion: noes; nos
...in a very handy place because there are no. of restaurants are nearby, and public ...
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Line 11, column 667, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er to prevent smelling in an apartment. Please let me know if you would have any...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62172284644 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64412579087 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50936329588 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2446624822 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.833333333 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207302361394 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682880000993 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878765395885 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144041499294 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118976949116 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.