Improvements in health, education and trade is essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Today, although people in many developed countries have a good lifestyle, individuals in developing countries are still in trouble to provide essentials for their lives. Some people believe for having a good lifestyle poorer nations must improve the level of health, education, and trade. However, for this goal, developed countries are in charge to help them. I personally agree with this idea that I will discuss it in the following.
As a matter of fact, it is noticeable to know that helping the poorer nations not only will be improved the people's lifestyles in such areas but also it has some benefits for the developed countries. One of the main benefits is that it would prevent the immigration of many people from such areas to the developed countries. In fact, annually, a huge number of individuals immigrate to richer countries to get access to a better life. In point of fact, in poorer countries, people suffer from a lack of facilities such as health care services, education, and so on. Moreover, in such countries, due to the recession, there are no available employment opportunities for all people. Therefore, many people in low-income countries migrate to welfare countries in dreams of having a good life. However, heaps of immigration will make a lot of difficulties for both immigrants and citizens in developed countries. As for some of the difficulties, firstly, immigration would increase the population in a certain area. In fact, it might be hard for the authority to manage a huge number of people in a country. To illustrate this vividly, it might be challenging for the government to put regulations in the country because immigrants come from different cultures and ethnicity. Therefore, each of them has some rituals or festivals that they would like to follow them and thus it would be difficult to put particular rules for all of them. In addition, with the growing population, citizens will be confronted with some other issues such as the loss of job opportunities, air pollution, and so on.
Although, some richer nations think helping to poorer countries do not have any profit for them and they should extensively invest on their own countries, it should be considered that in many developing countries, there are different types of natural resources such as precious mines, petroleum, and even the best pasture and agricultural lands. In fact, many occupations can be created in these areas and the trade would be able to flourish there. In fact, developed countries would be able to invest in these areas to make manufactures and increase the trade between two nations. In this case, poorer countries also would economically progress and eventually the manner of people’s lives will improve.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that helping to poorer nations by welfare nations have some benefits for both nations. The most significant benefit is the reduction of excessive immigrants to developed countries. Alternatively, the trade between communities will significantly increase that it would influence the improvement of people lives in poorer countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, as for, as to, in addition, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 41.998997996 188% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2608.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 505.0 315.596192385 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16435643564 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96281169034 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439603960396 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.0 506.74238477 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4982266755 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.391304348 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9565217391 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21739130435 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269641627692 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090312568037 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766067373189 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205411445115 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034835396917 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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