Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays, with the development of technology, various substitutive forms of medications have become popular. However, in the best condition, they might be ineffective and on the worst occasion, they might cause some detrimental side effects. I personally disagree with this statement and will discuss my perspectives in the following.
To commence with, in this day and age, any new forms of medications must be scientifically approved by the validate health care systems otherwise, the physicians would not been authorized to prescribe them for individuals. To investigate this vividly, before introducing any new drugs in the markets, researchers must perform a variety of experiments in the laboratory to show the effectiveness of such remedies against a specific illness. Moreover, any side effect and toxicity of those ones must be investigated.
Furthermore, lately, medical specialists would offer some supplementary forms of medications to treat some medical conditions. To exemplify, physicians might prescribe zinc, vitamin D or other forms of vitamins and mineral supplementation as the deficiency of those ones make the patient’s immune system weak. However, some individuals opine that such adjuvant medications are not necessary because those vitamins and minerals can be received from healthy diet. Although this idea is completely right, it is not been overlooked that some patients need to uptake more vitamins in order to boost their immune system and combat against their diseases.
To conclude, todays, with the new advances in medical sciences, people must trust the approved and alternative medicinal forms. In fact, they must follow any remedies their doctor prescribes for their illnesses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67054263566 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11129272479 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.303079612 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132519717057 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523952235626 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398021098055 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913822656485 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578883773821 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.