The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Recently a controversial debate is heated up about the increase in online shopping fiesta, which may cause to shut down of local shops and vendors in our neighborhood. I defend this argument for some of the significant changes observed. The trend of online shopping is boosted up due to huge discounts and the availability of the latest product –line at our fingertips.
To sustain in the market have become competitive than ever before, where the market was a monopoly of few vendors. Online shopping is a revolution in shopping and youngsters are more inclined to this ongoing trend. Moreover cutoff in prices and sales like big billion days by Amazon are adding to this. Customers can choose from a myriad range of products from any brand. With new policies like one-day delivery and easy return have lured more public. For instance, more purchasing is done by people during the festival season as compared to the normal season due to humongous discounts offered.
Furthermore, time-constraint is one of the factors for change in shoppers’ behavior. People are working hard to keep up with inflation and work-life balance. Humans prefer to spend more time at home with family than hassling with parking spaces in parking –lots. They look for a more convenient mode to buy groceries, clothing and even electronic items. A survey was done by a reputed supermarket to track down the reason for their declining sales; it was found that eight out of ten people prefer to do online shopping than coming to the supermarket for daily errands.
To summarize, online shopping has grown with a boom, but if we prefer to go to local shops and if they start to deliver at doorsteps then closing down of the shops can be diminished. This can save many people’s livelihood and create a balance in the economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...re more inclined to this ongoing trend. Moreover cutoff in prices and sales like big bil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00980392157 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75859775823 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8740433567 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180443143827 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549126744203 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692337326083 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117934837964 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350482510839 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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