The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.
According to recent researches, crime reaches the peak in late adolescence resulting in growing crime rates among children. In this essay, we will look at some causes of this increase and offer solutions to prevent crimes committed by teenagers.
One of the reasons of youth crime is domestic violence. Children who witness violence at home or are abused by their parents may think that this kind of behavior is acceptable. Teenagers exposed to violence are more likely to drop out of school in adolescence and get involved in bad environment. They also have behavioral problems such as aggression. One study proved that children abused at home show more aggression than those living in non-violent families.
Another cause of youth crime is a poverty. Financial problems that are widely spread in low-income societies make teenagers to commit crimes, as they simply cannot meet their basic needs like food, clothing or even shelter. Additionally, in such communities people face lack of jobs, medical services, education and etc. As a result, those who are not able to be successful in society have more chance to become criminals.
In order to diminish crime among youth communities should concentrate on environment in which children are growing and to take actions against domestic violence. Additionally low-income countries should try to improve standards of living.
To conclude we can state that despite many studies shows that teenagers become criminals because of their mindset and psychological traits, environment and culture in which they live have a crucial impact on their behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, may, so, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33992094862 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80116432629 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624505928854 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4367881778 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179666270064 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553233561807 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648550932344 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965793371764 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901847132474 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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